Quiet Spaces Creative Writing
Our creative writing sessions take place on Tuesday evenings from 6 - 7pm. You don't need any experience and we welcome both beginners and more experienced writers - and its free to take part.
Sessions are led by writer Nigel Wood, who teaches participants techniques and methods they can use to write poems.
Some examples of writing produced in the sessions are featured here.


The poetry session on 24/10/17 explored the theme of the 4 seasons in Manchester's quiet spaces.
Artist Akinyemi Oludele attended the session and represented the seasons in these beautiful paintings. Clockwise from top left: Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter


On Highfield Meadow
Adele Fowles
Feeling the wind on my face
and tasting the rain
Squelching through the slippery mud
and calling my dog to come to me
Resting among the dense trees
counting my breaths mindfully
and being being being here now
Loving blossom leaves, berries,
grasses and trees
Cherishing the changing moments,
hours and months
Discovering spiders’ webs that seem lit up by magic
Lying down in the green green grass
With the dog's lead against my feet
In Orford Park
Carl Peploe
Sitting one evening in Orford Park
Watching the sun set in a big red ball
Then there came an army of quad bikes
With little Nigel Mansells riding them
They didn’t half make a noise
With their engines.
They made a dog yelp and run off -
What an interruption!
The sun had gone again
So off I went home
To listen to Black Sabbath
Or maybe Alice Cooper
Listen to the Birds
Muriel
Listen to the magpies
Listen to the starlings
Listen to the tits
while eating sandwiches
Eating cake and sharing it
with the birds
while eating the crumbs
out of the wrapping papers
from the bins
left in spots
for the other users
for their needs
Platt Fields
Margaret Kershaw
In Platt Fields
you can get away from the traffic
In Platt Fields
you can sit round the lake
In Platt Fields
you can listen to the birds
In Platt Fields
you can visit pet’s corner
In Platt Fields
you can go to the funfair
In Platt Fields
you can watch the bonfire
Piccadilly
Elton Darlo
In Piccadilly, Manchester
there is a lot of activity
In Piccadilly Gardens
there is homelessness
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are political demos
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are musicians
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are playing areas
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are water fountains
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are lots of wood pigeons
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are evangelical preachers
In Piccadilly Gardens
there are various places to eat and drink
Highfield County Park
Bernadette O’Hanrahan
In Highfield County Park,
it’s fresh and pure air
In Highfield County Park
you can walk for hours
In Highfield County Park
you can feed carrots to the horses
In Highfield County Park
you can ride the horses
In Highfield County Park
you can visit the farm
In Highfield County Park
you see lots of nice people and lovely dogs
In Highfield County Park
you see lots of birds and listen
to them singing –
magpies, sparrows, robins
In Highfield County Park
entering from Highfield Road
you pass the wonderful allotments
Prestwich Clough
Carl Peploe
In the spring it is fresh and green
In the summer shady and cool
In autumn full of wondrous colours
In the winter it is dead and cold
You can walk there and feel at peace
And hear the birds chirp
And see the squirrels eat their nuts
And the doggies having walks
I first visited it when I was 7
To escape the summer heat
I had a paddle in the brook –
O what a joy that was!
I’ve visited it most years since
And it always brings me peace –
The sound of the babbling brook
And everything is love.
Four Seasons in the City
Elton Darlo
In autumn you put your slippers on
With falling leaves and blowing winds
Everybody's chin seems to go up a little
Winter in the city -
people are now more scarce
because of the bad weather
and blustery snow showers.
Rough sleepers and the homeless disappear
Spring now on its way
and it's a little warmer on the main street
In the shelter listening to the rhythms
of the falling rain
Heading into summer and the hot weather
My mood began to change
And life seemed brighter
with the sun in the sky
Weaste Cemetery
Carl Peploe
Weaste cemetery in winter
is ever so damn chilly.
I should have stayed at home
and not been so damned silly.
Weaste cemetery in spring -
all the bluebells are out
and off to church
go the pious and devout.
In summer it sizzles
except when it's wet.
There are no cats about -
they're staying in I bet.
In autumn the leaves drop
just like dead bodies
and lie around like drunks
when they've been drinking toddies.
In winter it's all white
with the frost and snow.
You need your woollies on -
it's not really the place to go.
4 Seasons in Marie Louise Gardens
Rae Story
In springtime we venture out again
In springtime the blossom bursts and the leaves unfurl
In springtime the birds gather sticks and twigs
and squirrels jump in flight
Throwing down a patchwork of blankets
Picnicking upon the freshly mown grass
Clinking of wine glasses of optimistic lovers
under a glowing green canopy of leaves
Showering leaves and fluttering and dancing
dying and death and gold and brown
cooling and darker and fireworks and echoes
naked and trees and silhouettes and sky
In winter a sudden bitter chill bites your bones
In winter a forlorn couple sit in silence on a bench
In winter remembrances come easily
Winter's longest night shrouds the hidden birth of a long off spring
In the Park
Adele Fowles
Why do I walk here day after day?
Because it is nearby and open all hours.
Who comes with me to this nearby space?
Sometimes my wife and our dog every time.
What inspires us within this park?
Without doubt the line of gnarled up old oaks.
When is it perfect and when it is not?
It is never perfect, it is perfectly formed.
How do I drag us here in the freezing dead of winter?
With beating hearts warm and living and strong.
Swinton Grove Park
Muriel
What is the sound that I hear?
The birds singing in the trees.
What are the colours that I see?
The green of the grass and the red of the swings.
Who are the people I see?
Families with children playing on the swings.
Where do they come from?
The buildings surrounding, the nearby neighbourhood,
houses, flats and hospitals,
having picnics with their family.
Scribbling the Urban Life
Elton Darlo
What am I doing here?
Just scribbling the urban life.
Why does this interest me?
Well, I love characters.
And these people, are they local?
No, city life is cosmopolitan.
Which means what?
We are all multicultural,
so this would be why I sketch.
Who else does it then?
Those like me who love the city.
Really, this means lots of colour-
of course, that's what I like.
Does the environment inspire?
To me - I am an urbanite.
Could I do better?
No, because I only sketch cities,
so I don't paint the countryside.
OK then, I get that.
Walking
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
What is the grey under my feet?
The concrete on the street.
What is the wet on my face?
The rain starting to fall.
What is the sound I'm hearing?
The wind rustling through the trees.
How do I feel?
Good, in my raincoat & wellies with umbrella to hand.
And who's this walking down the street towards me?
My friend's sister - we hug and say hello.
Postcard Poems
Postcard 1
Carl Peploe
Dear Mirabel,
Having a lovely time in Barbados -
bet you wish
you'd married me!
- Carl
Postcard 2
Elton Darlo
Hi Tom,
How's tricks?
At the moment I'm dripping wet,
in the middle of Market Street.
As you can imagine,
the weather
is disgusting.
I'll be travelling to Old Trafford
on the Metro to punish my wallet
in the souvenir shop.
I'm a big Red so before I go
I'll say Up the Reds
and see you soon.
Postcard 3
Carl Peploe
Dear Mirabel,
Having a nice time in Manchester
getting drunk -
I love a pint and a fight!
- Carl
Postcard 4
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
Hi Rae,
Having a great time at the Trafford Centre.
The weather is lovely -
sunshine through the roof in parts.
I'm just sitting down at the Italian restaurant
with my son Dwain.
Hope you're well and see you soon.
Why Do I Go To The Park?
Chi Ambekezo
To feel pleased
To feel glad
To feel less alone
To watch the people
To watch the street
To watch the driver in his bus
To watch the cars
To watch the houses
To watch the sun
Princess Road Playing Fields
Elton Darlo
Why did I go to Princess Road playing fields?
They are situated in the Whalley Range area,
near Moss Side and Maine Road football club -
home to Man City in the 60s.
Those training there were Olympic wrestlers
and serious athletes
and also famous footballers
like Alan Bowles and Kevin Tully.
The fields belonged to the YMCA
and staged great events.
Here on any day of the week
were fitness fanatics.
This busy thoroughfare of athletes
kept me busy. I love people watching
so that's why I loved
Princess Road playing fields.
HOME in the City
Adele Fowles
What is there about HOME that is quiet?
Quite a lot actually.
Even in the large café on the first floor
there is some space and peace to be found -
looking out of the large windows
to other shiny rooves red and blue.
The cinemas are dark & comfy & rarely packed;
the galleries often have dark spaces within,
showing arty films to watch on benches.
Why Do I Go to Moss Side Park?
Muriel
To see the children in the playground
having their picnic
and feeding the birds with sandwiches
as well as playing on the swings and roundabout
and painting the trees and birds
while enjoying the warm sunshine
Peace
Adele Fowles
Where does peace live?
Everywhere & nowhere.
What is the sound of peace?
A roar a hum a buzz a sound of nothing.
Who knows this peace?
How can this peace be mine?
Just let go of looking
because it's already yours.
Why Do I Go to Prestwich Clough?
Carl Peploe
It's green and peaceful
and has a babbling brook
with the little pied magpies
dipping for food
and it's cool and shady in hot weather
so I sit and remove my shirt
and feel at ease with nature.
When I first went there
one hot day in 1961
I was enchanted by the place.
There is nothing like it in Warrington.
I've been there every year since
in spring, summer, autumn, even
winter, and I still find it magical,
as good as it was 56 years ago
when I was a small boy.
Untitled
Elton Darlo
Because I am a social person
I love the city.
Because when I go in the centre
I meet others like me.
Because of this I enjoy a daily bus ride
to the place I love.
Because I also love walking
I walk round a lot.
Because of this I meet a lot
of different characters.
Because I am a character myself
I gel with others.
Because of these moments happening
I feel happy.
Because one day
I will write about it all.
Because in my life
I have had a lot to write about.
Because in my life
I have had an unusual start.
Because I had five different schools.
Because of this I had a
lack of academics.
Because students over the years have helped.
Because I developed a career
of art and personality .
Because I lived in the street
and was streetwise.
I Used To
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
I used to climb trees
but now I admire them
I used to play snakes and ladders
but now I don't bother
I used to be blonde
but now I'm dark haired
I used to wear pencil skirts
but now I wear baggy clothes
I used to smoke
but now I don't
I used to party a lot
but now very rarely
I used to hate school
but now I miss it
I used to walk a lot
but now I get taxis and buses
I used to have a lot of people around me
but now I don't
I used to be crap at art
but now I'm better
I used to wish I did more exercise
but now I do martial arts for health
I used to watch horror movies
but now I love comedies
I used to go to Blackpool as a kid
but now I don't - too dirty
I used to be married
but now I'm divorced and widowed
I used to wear a lot of make up
but now I wear very little
I used to have animals
but now I don't - and I miss them
Things I Like To Do in Manchester
r.e.b.
Dance to the music in grotty student bars
Walk home with my mate -
too poor to go in cars
Learn about the city and its people
Read about its history
Read about people like me -
dancing, walking and learning
Things To Do in Manchester
Carlson
Watch the flowers bloom
in Ardwick Green Park.
Sit down in Birchfield Park
watching the Asian boys play cricket
Reminding me
of when I was a boy
Things To Do in Manchester
Yak
Share time with others
Learn to cope
Enjoy home cooking
Watch the home side win at ice hockey,
basketball, swimming ...
Exercise at the local gym
Teach my ego a lesson,
to always to go to church
Meditate
Drive out to the countryside ...
In Manchester
Carl Peploe
Boozing in Sasha's
Visiting Southern Cemetery
Watching the sun set in a big red ball
Going to social groups
Drawing pictures of Nicholas Parsons
Doing graffiti
Knocking a copper's helmet off
Going to see strippers
Trying to cross Oxford Road
Things I Like To Do in Manchester
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
Going to the cinema at Printworks
Riding a bike in the summer
Walking in the fresh air
Learning art at St Luke's and sitting painting
Visiting the theatre
Taking pictures in the park
Going to the Eighth Day cafe
Walking the dogs with my sister
Admiring the stars
Looking in charity shops
Visiting art galleries
Praying in churches
Going out smiling and talking to people
Shopping in Manchester for clothes
Watching the moon
Things To Do in Manchester
r.e.b.
Breathe the cleaner air in Nutsford Vale
Walk along the canal from the football
Look out of window at the birds
Chat with the folk at St Luke's
Learn about history
Read about the city
Think about my minor presence,
my miniscule footprint
Visit my old housemate
Remember all the fun we had living together
Make new memories
Sit at home
Memories
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
Do you remember the ice on the trees
that December?
Do you remember the slippery pavement
as we walked to the bus stop?
Do you remember the Christmas lights
and the wreathes on the outside of houses?
Sheer delight in the night!
Do you remember we woke up Saturday morning
and saw the thick snow?
Do you remember the decorations on the ceiling -
Santa and his sleigh at the Trafford Centre?
Do you remember the igloo a neighbour built
behind the fence and you sat inside
as I took your picture in the freezing snow?
Do you remember the toy robin
my mam gave me 24 years ago?
I still have it today to put on my tree.
Winter Memories
Muriel
Do you remember
the slippery path
with ice on the ground?
Do you remember
how the weather
was cold and shivery?
Do you remember
dodging traffic in the snow
on Market Street?
Do you remember
decorating the Christmas tree
with tinsel and balls and a fairy?
Do you remember
putting Christmas lights on the tree
and making beautiful scenery?
December
Carl Peploe
Do you remember a worse December?
There probably was in Victorian times
when kids went up chimneys
and poor barefooted urchins begged for a crust.
The coldest ever December was in 1879
when the poor farmers couldn't feed their swine
and beggars died in the street
and hypocrites went to church -
they were the bad old days
when you were left in the lurch.
Victorian values were harsh:
The rich were rich and the poor stayed poor.
How sodding horrible -
there were no good old days at all!
Haiku
sun shining brightly
last year's white flowers reappearing -
a miracle!
(Bernadette O'Hanrahan)
thirst increases
tuna sandwich calling
bowls cry for lack of grub
(Yak)
sun shining at last
empty pockets
happy days
(r.e.b.)
light through stained class streaming
dust motes whirling
stale smell of unlived centuries
(r.e.b.)
in the garden hanging out washing
looked at the kitchen window -
my late father staring at the hills
(Bernadette O'Hanrahan)
July 12th 1980
in my gran's living room
the ghost of my mother
(Carl Peploe)
granite monolith planted
visible for miles
human hive
(r.e.b.)
weeping at the loss of teddy bear
for teddy was company, a mate indeed
enough to fill the evening
(Yak)
on the flea market
looking for fleas
oh fuck - I've lost my keys
(Carl Peploe)
birds in my garden
must remember to feed them
spring on its way
(Bernadette O'Hanrahan)
grease on fingers
walking steadily with conversation
one pound thirty lighter
(r.e.b.)
went in the pound shop
staff very helpful
smiles go a long way
(Bernadette O'Hanrahan)
human detritus littered
oily sheen on concrete
home calling
(r.e.b.)
I'm going to Prestwich Clough
when the nice weather's here
and the sky's blue and clear
(Carl Peploe)
When I feel sad
Carlston
When I feel sad
I try to find someone to cheer me up
When I feel happy
I try to spread the happiness
When I feel down
music cheers me up
When I feel good
the words come from my mouth
like the blood flows
through my veins
Happy is a cigar called Hamlet
Yak
When I feel depressed
music is not far away
Joyful is the head
feeling high
Ecstatic is me
when the festive season
is back once again
Selfless is me
following a visit to my local
Sadness is when
Bjorn Borg gives one away
Stressful is when
it's time to return from the football match
By the Canal
Carl Peploe
bindweed and flies
worms and beetles
puddles and mud
empty bottles and beer cans
discarded food and vomit
fed up and thirsty
wishing my life away
wishing this fucking canal
were the Panama canal
then I'd get bitten by a snake
In Nutsford Vale
r.e.b.
flowers & trees
& stagnation & mud
& litter & grass
& brambles & nettles
& blossom
happy & peaceful
& calm & relaxed
& secure & alive
& thriving
bushes & shrubs
& walkers & dogs
& footprints & insects
& birds & cats
& berries
collected & thoughtful
& free & detached
& breathing & hopeful
& home
I Hate Hating
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
I hate racist people
I hate people sitting in cars running the engine
I hate dog poo on the streets
I hate judgemental people
I hate when the phone rings and I'm busy
I hate noisy neighbours
I hate people who have nothing good to say about other people
I hate nosy people
I hate dirty conveyor belts when I'm out shopping
I hate recycled carrier bags
that sit in trolleys after being on the floor
I hate having my feet tickled
I hate horror movies
I hate men who hate women
I hate to see poverty
I hate being cold
I hate being hungry
I hate being lonely
I hate bailiffs
I hate being in pain
I hate loud music
I hate some of my past
I hate some of my present
I hate my OCD sometimes
I hate being woken up by outside noise
I hate being fat
I hate being sick
I hate pollution
I hate hating
Canal Walk: Oxford Road to Castlefield
r.e.b.
rolling wheels lead to beeping
idling engines on wet roads
chatter, coughing, feet shuffling
laughter surrounds the swish of puddles
distant traffic breathing by the gushing water
the banging knocking bus diesel engine
carries on the wind
traffic chatter, chatter traffic
whirring sound from garden
footsteps passing running water
train passing lock 39
drip drip plip plop
rumble rumble roar of engines
brakes by the bridge
bird squawking, feet shuffling
rustle of wind and water falling
building banging work, train braking
connected at Catalan Square
bustling wind over water lapping
clanging coughing train rumbling past
Manchester my Manchester
When I'm Feeling Blue
Carl Peploe
When I'm feeling blue
I go to somewhere shady
and it makes me very lazy,
all the butterflies go crazy.
When I feel like jacking it all in
then I go and kick the bin.
I feel as if I cannot win
and I want to drink a lot of gin.
When I feel all knackered up
I want to drink from God's own cup
and have a damn good sup
and go stroke a little pup
When I feel down and out
and want to hide from some lout,
there's too much misery about -
I need a bottle of stout.
When I'm feeling lost
and all my wires are crossed
the dice are wrongly tossed
and people's eyes are like frost.
[untitled]
r.e.b.
Because of the deafening silence
Because of the noise of the waves
Because of the empty pockets of stillness
Because of the great architecture of land and sea
Because of the rocks and pasture
Because of the goats and gulls
Because I can be the only person
Because it is not remote
Where Am I?
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
I'm in the area twice a week,
I accidentally walk past and sometimes
have meetings near there.
I do appreciate it - there was
nothing like it in the past.
I walk around and sit near the lily pond
and sometimes I buy stuff for my garden.
I love it when they have workshops.
You can enjoy food and drink there all the time.
There are great artifacts - canoes and such -
and much fun to be had by everyone.
You can forget your troubles.
There are lots of flowers, trees and plants.
It makes me feel relaxed and happy
after travelling, which can
make me feel quite snappy.
Longsight, Tuesday Evening
Group poem
sun setting red
shining in
through the window
I'm A Lover Not A Fighter
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
I'm a lover not a fighter
I'm a poet
I'm a writer
I love animals
I love flowers
I love love
I love laughing
I love travelling
I love all kinds of music
I love my son
I love my family
I love peace
I love good food
I love being healthy
I love being happy
I love being nice to people
I love people being nice to me
Out of the City
r.e.b.
The lapping of the waves
The sand between my toes
The clear air breathing for me
The stillness of peace
The relief of a long walk ended
The post sandwich satisfaction
The feeling of not wanting
The being in a space & time
Of complete contentedness
Levenshulme in the Rain
Bernadette O'Hanrahan
cold and wet
umbrella and raincoat
cars splashing and people laughing
walking and dodging
blossom trees and wind
rushing and tired
ringing phone and bags in hands
dogs barking and birds stop singing
roadworks and flowerbeds
cars beeping and takeaway smells
hailstones and face stinging